tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4818215410689699213.post6069438997275530124..comments2024-03-28T10:52:38.144-04:00Comments on Shelf Actualization: First Line Friday!MacEvoy DeMaresthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01017894338443984921noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4818215410689699213.post-4300591186161815922023-07-31T12:52:15.630-04:002023-07-31T12:52:15.630-04:00gümüşhane
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T61<a href="https://gumushane.escortdocs.com/" title="gümüşhane" rel="nofollow">gümüşhane</a><br /><a href="https://bilecik.escortdocs.com/" title="bilecik" rel="nofollow">bilecik</a><br /><a href="https://erzincan.escortdocs.com/" title="erzincan" rel="nofollow">erzincan</a><br /><a href="https://nevsehir.escortdocs.com/" title="nevşehir" rel="nofollow">nevşehir</a><br /><a href="https://nigde.escortdocs.com/" title="niğde" rel="nofollow">niğde</a><br />T61tahanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4818215410689699213.post-74597540392779152782012-03-23T10:06:11.543-04:002012-03-23T10:06:11.543-04:00This feels a lot like the other Stegner line you p...This feels a lot like the other Stegner line you posted a while back: "Now I think they will leave me alone" or something like that.<br /><br />Very conversational. Very simple. It doesn't knock you on your butt, but that's fine.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4818215410689699213.post-1164947156007024162012-03-23T09:29:01.868-04:002012-03-23T09:29:01.868-04:00"the air beyond the tree was scratched with f..."the air beyond the tree was <b>scratched</b> with fine rain."<br /><br />That's a great image. Something impossible to scratch, and yet, that's exactly what it looks like as rain approaches. <br /><br />As for the first line, I like it. I think it works <i>because</i> he omits the location. In doing so, he transports us to wherever he is. We're sitting there with him, almost as if we're chatting face to face.MacEvoyhttp://www.shelfactualization.comnoreply@blogger.com